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Holder Of The Key

PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:50 pm
by AnimeGirl
This is a project I have been working on, and I finally got to drawing it! The comic is hosted on my own Webs website. The story is basically about a girl who gets lost in fantasy, and she discovers a magical locket which creates a door that leads to another world! Upon entering the world, you have a "new identity", a different name and appearance. There are others who can come into this world called "Key Holders" which have a key that transports them from here to there, but Hikaru's locket is the only thing that creates a door, thus bridging reality and fantasy. But there are these mysterious people that keep coming up to Hikaru, so she can "wake up!". Who are they?

http://tofusheets.webs.com/apps/photos/album?albumid=7448827

Minimum age: 11

Violence: 4; There will be some battle scenes and bashing around, and maybe a little blood.

Language: 0: None what-so-ever!

Sexual Content: 0: Nothing beyond a kiss.

Nudity (or skimpy outfits): 0: All clothing conservative!

Bad Region: 5: Hikaru's locket is magical, and upon saying the magic words, a door bridges this world and the other world appears. Others also have keys which directly transports them to the other world. In the other world, they have powers, which are contained in cards. These special cards give them different abilities or power-up their weapons.

This is actually a Christian manga, and all the stuff I just mentioned will be explained when the story comes to a conclusion. So all this "magic stuff" well, there's an explanation for all of that, but if I told you, I just gave away the end of the story XD

PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 11:29 pm
by steenajack
Ooooo, this sounds interesting. I'd love to read this. Can you post a link to the site when you have one available?

PostPosted: Fri Nov 13, 2009 8:03 am
by AnimeGirl
steenajack (post: 1355812) wrote:Ooooo, this sounds interesting. I'd love to read this. Can you post a link to the site when you have one available?


Gah! I forgot to post the link to it!

*edits post*

PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:53 pm
by steenajack
Okay, I've read some of it. To be honest, I was a bit skeptical due to the art. But then as I kept reading, I found that you are pretty good at telling interesting stories. I'd say practice with your art (which every artist NEEDS to due), and keep writing/drawing this story. It seems like a pretty good story.

PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:23 pm
by AnimeGirl
Yeah, I know I have to keep practicing. These are basically just drafts, which if I continue to draw these stories, I'll get better with time. Eventually, I do plan on redrawing it.

PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 1:01 am
by steenajack
BTW: I'm reading the Bleed No More Manga. It's pretty good so far. I like it XD!

PostPosted: Tue Nov 17, 2009 9:04 am
by AnimeGirl
steenajack (post: 1356608) wrote:BTW: I'm reading the Bleed No More Manga. It's pretty good so far. I like it XD!


Oh the art in that is especially bad XD That's why I'll redraw all of volume 1 before I continue. (How'd you find it in the CM Gallery???)

I'm also going to make Holder Of The Key a novel as well. While I am writing it, I will slowly work on the manga. I plan to get both published.

PostPosted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 1:56 pm
by steenajack
Oh, I just found Bleed No More in the manga section somewhere in the CM gallery. I wanted to find out what happens next. Ooooo, you are writing a novel? Cool!!! You are definetly a talented story-teller. You're just so good at making these storylines that draw people in.

PostPosted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 9:06 am
by AnimeGirl
Hehe, thanks! I really thank God for the talent. Without Him, I can create nothing good!

PostPosted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 9:58 pm
by steenajack
That is so true. God inspires us to write stories that glorify Him and bring others to Him.

PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 9:03 am
by Phantom_Sorano
Hmmmm....I went to your website and read Split Oath and Holder of the Key. Both have great potential. You have a natural ability to tell a good story. I look forward to future installments.

PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 11:43 am
by AnimeGirl
Yeah, I plan to update it, hopefully soon.

PostPosted: Wed Nov 25, 2009 11:39 am
by rocklobster
keep up the good work!

PostPosted: Mon Nov 30, 2009 8:57 am
by animeguild53
keep going... hehe... i love your stories!

PostPosted: Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:15 pm
by AnimeGirl
Sorry I have not been updating this. My art just got better, and since I barely have many pages, I am considering redrawing this draft to make it more pleasing to the eye. The story, will of course, remain the same.