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Postby steenajack » Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:30 pm

Are you talking to me or Cafcow?
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:28 pm

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Postby steenajack » Sat Nov 14, 2009 11:39 pm

Okay, just checking. lol XD
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:55 pm

steenajack (post: 1356127) wrote:Alright, the fan art has been sent via-email.


Received it! Thank you so much, it's so great! ]X3

Mr. Hat'n'Clogs (post: 1356139) wrote:Ooh, I like it, I like it a lot. The only complaint I think I have is Ploog's design, which doesn't strike me the right way, but the rest more than makes up for it. I wish I could draw as well as you can.


Thank you very much!
I had a bit of difficultly with Ploog in the first chapter (which was drawn several months ago). He's much too stiff and what not.
I practiced his design and he looks much better in the second chapter. Hopefully you will find him more pleasing to the eye in that.

One of the things about this comic is that it started out as just a parody of the magical girl genera. Though it still pokes fun of stuff, it has turned into a much more mature story line]:3
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Postby steenajack » Mon Nov 16, 2009 9:52 am

OMGosh! That is so funny about Ploog. Anyway, still your #1 fan! And I'm glad you like the fanart I sent you.
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Mon Nov 16, 2009 2:40 pm

Cafcow (post: 1356416) wrote:
Thank you very much!
I had a bit of difficultly with Ploog in the first chapter (which was drawn several months ago). He's much too stiff and what not.
I practiced his design and he looks much better in the second chapter. Hopefully you will find him more pleasing to the eye in that.

One of the things about this comic is that it started out as just a parody of the magical girl genera. Though it still pokes fun of stuff, it has turned into a much more mature story line]:3


As one not very familiar with Magical Girl series(except D.N. Angel, but I don't think that counts), I wouldn't have gotten the joke. Thanks for the clarification, I look forward to seeing the second chapter. Keep up the good work!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:03 pm

This weeks page is up~!

steenajack (post: 1356456) wrote:OMGosh! That is so funny about Ploog. Anyway, still your #1 fan! And I'm glad you like the fanart I sent you.

Oh I loved your art. ]X3

Mr. Hat'n'Clogs (post: 1356505) wrote:As one not very familiar with Magical Girl series(except D.N. Angel, but I don't think that counts), I wouldn't have gotten the joke. Thanks for the clarification, I look forward to seeing the second chapter. Keep up the good work!


lol, yeah, there will be other small jokes like this thrown in through out the comic. ]:3
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Wed Nov 18, 2009 9:25 am

:O That was hilarious! "She left me!!"
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Postby steenajack » Wed Nov 18, 2009 10:32 pm

That was hilarious!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next. XD!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Wed Dec 02, 2009 11:45 am

Two pages up! Sorry for the delay, been busy lately. ]XD;;
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Postby steenajack » Wed Dec 02, 2009 4:13 pm

Still LOVIN' IT!!!!!!! XD! I've joined your facebook group BTW.
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Wed Dec 02, 2009 5:37 pm

Ahahaha!!! That's hilarious!! I'm in love with your comic Cafcow!!

And there's a Facebook group? I'm so joining once I find it!
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Postby Wave » Fri Dec 11, 2009 6:27 am

Kool! Your art is good and the story is intresting. No offense but the web sight could use some work.
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Postby steenajack » Mon Dec 21, 2009 1:00 am

OH BOY!!!!! An update!!!! XDDDDDDD!!!!!
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Mon Dec 21, 2009 8:05 am

Wait, there was an update? I see no pages after 42!!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Dec 21, 2009 7:53 pm

Wave (post: 1360169) wrote:Kool! Your art is good and the story is intresting. No offense but the web sight could use some work.

Well this is the first time I've created a website. Plus I have no one to help me, and I have a lot on my plate. It's the best I can do for now. ^^]:3

Also new picture up on TopWebComics
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Tue Dec 22, 2009 5:13 pm

ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG NEW PAGES!!!!!!! TWO OF THEM!!!!!

I like your comic BTW.

The two new pages are good, it'll be interesting to see the other girls in action. Sam wins though, in all ways.
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Postby SeraphicCharm » Thu Dec 24, 2009 12:27 pm

oh my word, your work is amazing!!! it has a very intriguing storyline, so i just had to keep reading and reading!!! great work! i can't wait to see the rest of it!
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Postby steenajack » Mon Jan 04, 2010 5:38 pm

I second the emotion!!!!! XD!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Fri Jan 08, 2010 2:52 pm

SeraphicCharm (post: 1362462) wrote:oh my word, your work is amazing!!! it has a very intriguing storyline, so i just had to keep reading and reading!!! great work! i can't wait to see the rest of it!


Aww! Thank you! I'm so glad you are liking it! ]X3


I am so, SO sorry for the lack of updates. It was kind of crazy for a couple weeks.
But for the late updates I present you all with the last four pages of chapter one. (if you don't get the last panel on the last page then go back and re-read the first page)

Onto chapter 2~~
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Postby Kung_Fu_Master » Fri Jan 08, 2010 3:32 pm

First chapter review:

-Art: A very good job. Better than me so in my opinion "YOU ARE AMAZING!".

-Story: Well paced and flows nicely. My only problem is the only a few pages every now and again updates which is not your fault in the slightest (just nit-picking again)

-Characters: Though there are just a few and most we just met, your presentation of their personalities is excellent.

-Final Grade: For the first chapter of a nonprofessional, it is the best I have seen. I feel an overwhelming desire to see more and I know you will not disappoint. 9/10
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Postby steenajack » Sat Jan 09, 2010 12:05 pm

Cafcow, your manga is AWESOME!!! I can't wait to read more. When it's all finished, you should try to get it published or something.
The art is great! The story is intriguing! I love all the main characters! And this is SOOOOO FUNNY! You have a great sense of humor intertwined within the story. I love it! XD!
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:55 pm

Oh yay! New update!

I'm still loving your comic! I think Tori might be my new second favorite.

And now I know the assailant's gender!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:55 pm

Kung_Fu_Master (post: 1364506) wrote:-Story: Well paced and flows nicely. My only problem is the only a few pages every now and again updates which is not your fault in the slightest (just nit-picking again)

Thank you for your great review Kung_Fu_Master! I really appreciate it.
I am goig to try to get into the habbit of picking one day to update on every week, I jsut need to figure out what day would be good. ]:3

steenajack (post: 1364639) wrote:Cafcow, your manga is AWESOME!!! I can't wait to read more. When it's all finished, you should try to get it published or something.
The art is great! The story is intriguing! I love all the main characters! And this is SOOOOO FUNNY! You have a great sense of humor intertwined within the story. I love it! XD!

Oh, thank you so very much! I would love to publish my works someday. Right now I'm no where near the publishing level, but I keep trying to improve. ]:3
I'm glad you like the humor! Most of the time I'm the only person who laughs at my stuff, so I didn't think it was going to be very funny. ]XDD]Oh yay! New update!

I'm still loving your comic! I think Tori might be my new second favorite.

And now I know the assailant's gender![/QUOTE]
Aw, thanks! ]X3
lol! Sorry about that, where were several people who didn't know his gender, didn't mean for that. ]XD;;
He's just supposed to be one of those 'pretty boy' bishies. ]XDD;;


New update, it's only chapter 2's cover page though.

The fan art section of the site will be opened soon. ]:3
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Postby steenajack » Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:16 am

X3! I like your pretty boy bishies. They are very cute/handsome/beautiful!
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Postby jadeTheshade » Sat Jan 23, 2010 1:50 pm

i just found the comic, oh, maybe a year or half year back and am just now getting around to saying how much i like/appriciate it. i really enjoy your art, it remindes me of clamp a bit, and the story has held my interest so far^^
thanks for posting it on the net!
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Postby steenajack » Sun Jan 24, 2010 9:28 pm

It does kinda remind me of CLAMP. XD! Cafcow, in other words, YOUR ART IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
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Postby SorasOathkeeper » Mon Jan 25, 2010 2:24 pm

Two page MG update! Plus the Fanart section is finally open! ]: DDD


jadeTheshade (post: 1368050) wrote:i just found the comic, oh, maybe a year or half year back and am just now getting around to saying how much i like/appriciate it. i really enjoy your art, it remindes me of clamp a bit, and the story has held my interest so far^^
thanks for posting it on the net!

Aww, thank you so very much, I'm so happy that you are enjoying it! ]X3

steenajack (post: 1368224) wrote:It does kinda remind me of CLAMP. XD! Cafcow, in other words, YOUR ART IS BEAUTIFUL!!!!!


lol! Thank you!

Yeah, the funny thing is I've never read any of CLAMP's stuff (I do like the art though). My style was inspired my Kijima Renga. He's a fan of some of CLAMP's work though, so maybe he's inspired by them? (which mean's I'd be inspired by then since I'm inspired by him) ]XD
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Postby Mr. Hat'n'Clogs » Mon Jan 25, 2010 3:09 pm

Cafcow (post: 1368294) wrote:Two page MG update! Plus the Fanart section is finally open! ]: DDD

Yeah, the funny thing is I've never read any of CLAMP's stuff (I do like the art though). My style was inspired my Kijima Renga. He's a fan of some of CLAMP's work though, so maybe he's inspired by them? (which mean's I'd be inspired by then since I'm inspired by him) ]XD


Yay update! Just saw that on Facebook.

And yay transitive property?
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Postby steenajack » Mon Jan 25, 2010 10:39 pm

OH BOY! An update! I REALLY LOVE YOUR MANGA CAFCOW! XDDDDDDD!!!!! Thank you for posting up my fanart. As the manga moves along, I think I'll draw some more with some couples. X3! I was inpired by some of the other fanart there (with the couples drawn.)
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