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Soft

Postby dduk » Sat May 24, 2008 7:50 pm

[SIZE="5"]:::LASTEST UPDATE:::[/SIZE]
[color="Red"]May 24, 2008
Chapter 1: Pages 1-7
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[SIZE="3"][color="Orange"]>>> COMIC LINK <<<[/color][/SIZE]

Soft is a romance/comedy/drama and a rendition of my very old comic Spring Breeze. Soft is a different comic altogether but has the same idea and feel of Spring, i took some events from Spring that i wanted to keep as well as discarding other events in order to better construct the story

the first 7 pages were actually done 1 yr ago around this time, i stopped working on it because I wanted to develop the story a bit more in my head. My style changed a bit after that so i tried to redraw the pages again but needless to say that didn't go too well. but then after lookin over these pages again i found that they were just fine to use so..

i hope u like it!

[SIZE="3"][color="Blue"]:::NOTES:::[/color][/SIZE]
I hope to update this as often as possible, thought i'd say that now.. hehe


[color="blue"]Violence: >> 1 - 3 <<nothing too major, a 3 just in case i decide to add something like that, for this story there prolly wont be anything intense

Language: >> 3 << nothing really bad, prolly the worst words i would use would prolly be dam or damit

Sexual Content: >> 2 << no comment'o

Nudity (or skimpy outfits): >> 1 << i was never really fond of drawing like that, but 1 just in case

Bad Religion: >> 0 << no religion involvement[/color]
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Postby Cap'n Nick » Sat May 24, 2008 10:24 pm

Gorgeous as usual! I'll be following this.
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Postby dduk » Tue May 27, 2008 11:56 am

Cap'n Nick: thx!

will be tryin to update with 2 pages a week, tryin for tues and thurs

speaking of release, another page out today page 8: [color="Red"]Soft page 8[/color]

weird i cant find the edit button for my post.. -_-;
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Postby Hana Ryuuzaki » Tue May 27, 2008 5:17 pm

[font="palatino Linotype"]Very good art!!

The only thing is that there is some shading from pencil or something that's kinda blurring some of the drawings and making them kinda gray...

Other than that, it's really pretty! *^*[/font]
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Tue May 27, 2008 6:05 pm

I'm liking this so far.

And I giggled when you named her Mei'Ling. XD Reminded me of Metal Gear Solid.
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Postby shade of dae » Wed May 28, 2008 8:17 pm

I remember reading Spring and liking it, and, although there is only 8 pages, I think I'm liking Soft as well, if not even better. Great art!
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Postby dduk » Wed May 28, 2008 11:48 pm

still can't edit my main post grr..

anyway heres the thurs release for the week: [color="Red"]Page 9[/color]


Hana Ryuuzaki (post: 1230185) wrote:[font="palatino Linotype"]Very good art!!

The only thing is that there is some shading from pencil or something that's kinda blurring some of the drawings and making them kinda gray...

Other than that, it's really pretty! *^*[/font]


thx! as for the grey ill try to clean up the panels better next time, sry bought that ^^;

Mr. SmartyPants: metal gear solid hm..? haha i actually thought up her name on the fly and Mei'Ling sounded nice hehe

shade of dae: spring and soft share most of their similarities near the beginning but later on their stories will diverse substantially, so if it feels like the same comic so far its prolly because it sorta is but it wont be for long haha

thanks all for reading and the comments!

next update late mon or early tues!

thx again!

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Soft page 10

Postby dduk » Mon Jun 02, 2008 10:10 am

An early update
wee another page: [color="Red"]page 10[/color]

guess u cant edit previous post after a certain amount of time, doh if i knew that earlier i wouldnt have posted what i posted in the first post 'latest release' ahem..

ah well guess this way works too :lol:
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Postby marcjames07 » Mon Jun 02, 2008 9:22 pm

You never failed to amaze me dduk ^^

Simply awesome.
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Soft Page 11

Postby dduk » Wed Jun 04, 2008 6:59 pm

wee another early release!
heres page 11: [color="Red"]Page 11[/color]

actually a little ahead of schedule with pages haha, thats a first also a good thing =)

marcjames07: thx! glad u like it!
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Soft Page 12

Postby dduk » Mon Jun 09, 2008 3:44 pm

Another page bites the dust :thumb:

[color="Red"]Page 12[/color]
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Soft Page 13

Postby dduk » Wed Jun 11, 2008 4:52 pm

Last update for the week [color="Red"]Page 13[/color]
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Postby Song_of_Storms » Mon Jun 16, 2008 5:17 am

This is awesome! Love it! 8D
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Soft Page 14

Postby dduk » Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:17 pm

Erin_Artist06: thanks!

and another page: [color="Red"]Page 14[/color]
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Soft Page 15

Postby dduk » Wed Jun 18, 2008 3:08 pm

And the last page for this week^^

[color="Red"]Page 15[/color]
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Soft good news and bad..

Postby dduk » Tue Jun 24, 2008 2:40 pm

okayy..
well first the good new!, good news is that i FINALLY have a thorough story thought up, so i'll be able to progress this little comic very smoothly now!
that being said i was able to finish pages more quickly because i know how i will proceed now, woot right?
haha

but then the bad news is that because of this developed story i had to scrap, literally scrap that is, most (that is like more then 50%) of the pages i've done so far; more accurately every page i did except for 1,2, 5 and 6 (5 and 6 being now page 4 and 5 respectively).
Reasoning for this is that the characters being portrayed thus far do not coincide with the developed story at all, Thus their removal; characters like Hikari was too aggressive and Hwann being too retarded and Fei etc..

anyways so where does that leave the current story now? well currently i'm 'ahem' back on to page 7 in the number of pages i have completed as of this entry ahehe..

as of this posting, ill put up the 5 pages from the beginning again in the main gallery with links to each other i guess.

I'll leave the scrapped chapters in scraps which now they respectively fit in haha

ill post new pages like before again starting thurs on page 6!

ah yes, if you did read the comic/manga (thank you very much!), i really recommend starting from the beginning again, even tho the new page i did is page 3 out of the 5, the story took a different turn then what i had before =p

thats about it regarding my comic =)

I reposted page 1 - 5 of my comic on my devart account, havent updated my other page yet

pages can be found here: [color="Red"]Page 1[/color]
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Page 6 and 7

Postby dduk » Wed Jun 25, 2008 10:44 pm

Dual release today, page 6 and 7; trying to catch back up to where i scrapped

[color="Red"]Page 6[/color]

[color="Red"]Page 7[/color]

sorry again for scrapping pages, but this was the only way i could think of to progress smoothly :shake:
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Postby Kunoichi » Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:49 am

*faints...wow your art is absolutely amazing...I'm looking at starting my own manga but I wanted to know where you did the paneling cuz your squares are perfectly lined...or did you have pre paneled pages? *drools at pretty pictures

lol sorry this is what no sleep does to me
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Postby dduk » Thu Jun 26, 2008 9:47 am

Kunoichi (post: 1239204) wrote:*faints...wow your art is absolutely amazing...I'm looking at starting my own manga but I wanted to know where you did the paneling cuz your squares are perfectly lined...or did you have pre paneled pages? *drools at pretty pictures

lol sorry this is what no sleep does to me


ah i make my own pages to do paneling, basically just a huge box on paper where the comic will go in. From there the panels are done through measurements, it helps a lot to have a grid ruler. hope that helps :thumb:
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Postby Kunoichi » Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:49 pm

hai ^_^ Arigato dduk-sensei! ^_^
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Soft Page 8

Postby dduk » Mon Jun 30, 2008 12:15 pm

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Soft Page 9

Postby dduk » Thu Jul 03, 2008 3:24 pm

Soft Page 9 done

[color="Red"]Soft Page 9[/color]

it's kinda boring to read it 1 page at a time, im considering releasing in bulk next time =p
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Soft Page 11

Postby dduk » Tue Jul 08, 2008 1:55 pm

Soft Page 11 done: [color="Red"]Page 11[/color]

so where's 10? well i removed the new page 3 and put in my old page 3 and 4 in its place so the pages got shifted up 1 :)
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Soft Update

Postby dduk » Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:55 am

I re'added all the pages i took out before and merged 1 of the older pages with one of the newer making a 'new' page 12

page 13 is originally page 11 from the last update (my previous post here), next page update will be page 14

looks like im back on track again :)
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Postby Wave » Wed Jul 23, 2008 3:39 pm

After page 13 I get redirected to a "Choose your Celebrity page." See screen shot.

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