" wrote:RustyClaymore 11:27 - Ah yes, Socks is the single raindrop responsible for the flood. XD
KhakiBlueSocks (post: 1276810) wrote:[font="Trebuchet MS"][SIZE="4"][color="RoyalBlue"]Woot! Update! First a bit of a backtrack--
I was going back to the start of the chapter, and I noticed something odd (and I'm not trying ot be picky at all, its just something I noticed because I collect clocks)...when we see Brendan turning off his alarm clock, there are two bells on top of the clock, which leads me to believe that the clock in question is a bell-type alarm clock which rings rather than beeps. Of course, they do make electric clocks that have the bells on top for decoration, but I was just noticing! But enough of my chatter of clocks! I have an update to review!
I know either myself or another person mentioned this before, but I love how innocent Stick Monkey is. And I love the fact that you make him smart enough to know some things, yet slightly innocent and curious enough to ask and explore on his own. I think it's hillarious that you have Brendan imagining what could happen if he left SM alone. Nice touch with the little heads in the corners by the way. I have to give you a bit of tough love with the lightbulb though...shame on Brendan for not using an energy-efficient bulb! Doesn't he know we have an energy crisis and that the typical idea lightbulb uses 500 watts?! (Just kidding! I love the idea, and the little chain dangling from the base)
Great job, as usual, my friend! Keep up the great work! And like I said earlier--don't bug out over your update schedule--especially now that you're a working girl. Just take your time and have fun with it![/color][/SIZE][/font]
whisperingloon (post: 1293395) wrote:More please? Please?
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