One P1ece

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One P1ece

Postby taboo » Tue Dec 06, 2005 1:55 pm

Oh sweet, a webcomics forum! x3 Now we're talking!!

OK~ First, this is One P1ece, a 'parallel/alternate universe' of the One Piece Series. A friend (CosimicDebris again. For some reason we come up with the craziest ideas together so I just have to draw them) and I were talking about Sanji and Nami and it was like "what if Sanji didn't like Nami?" So it escalated into an entire ... somthing. So I decided to turn it into a comic (mostly for practice, and also I thought it would be fun). SO you probably won't get much of it if you've never read One Piece, in which case you're missing out like you have no idea; both with my comic and ESPECIALLY with the original series. I suppose it could be enjoyable without reading the original, it just won't be as funny.

Minimum age: Gah, that's difficult. 7+ I guess.... It's not for me to judge really.

Violence: 5 I suppose. Haven't really gotten that far yet, but just as a warning becuase there will be blood. It is a pirate story after all. As of now, 0.

Language: 2 at the very extreme most. Like maybe 'A' or 'D' and used only in extreme situations. But as of now, 0.

Sexual Content: 2 I suppose. No sex at all, but... one of the characters is a tad flamey.

Nudity (or skimpy outfits): 1 for now because I haven't fully written out the story. But as of now, it's 0.

Bad Religion: 2 just because it's about pirates. No magic or religion involved.

Other: 3 There will be alcohol and one of the characters is a chain smoker.

^ I'll update this as the story goes along. It should be about 3 chapters.


ONE P1ECE: a parallel universe of One Piece

Chapter 1
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Chapter 1 is about 75% finished.
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Postby Rjdreamer » Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:01 pm

That is FREAKING HILARIOUS! *lol* I love the thoughtful Luffy!
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Postby Myoti » Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:12 pm

Somehow, I think Oda would be proud (if it has giant robots, you know he'd go for it XD ).

I found it funny that Sanji (he's short! :O ) was coughing during the Smoke Star, even though he was still smoking.

And WHAT THE SHIZ?! SOGEKING?! O.O
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Postby taboo » Sat Dec 10, 2005 10:51 pm

Myoti wrote:Somehow, I think Oda would be proud (if it has giant robots, you know he'd go for it XD ).
:O You know.... that's strikingly similar to a comic I wrote earlier in the year... Ya know what, if you download THIS ZIP FILE , you'll get all my earlier comics, including the Usopp doujinshi I forementioned and all my one-shots. There is some blood, and a bit of curseing. I hope 'crap' doesn't count. o__o Anyway, old old art from almost a year ago. Don't judge plz. x3 It's kinda interesting because I never knew how to draw Usopp before I made that, so I kinda had to force myself to.

I found it funny that Sanji (he's short! :O ) was coughing during the Smoke Star, even though he was still smoking.
xD You know, you're the second person that caught that, and I'm glad. All I can say is that I was afraid people wouldn't get the joke and secondly, I didn't want to take away from Sogeking's entrance.


XD Thanks guys, glad you like it so far! ^^ I should have two more pages by next friday so keep a look out.
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Postby Myoti » Sun Dec 11, 2005 2:23 pm

I'm checkin' the old one now.

Oh, and I finally caught something about Luffy. When he shows up, he actually recognizes Sogeking! XD

And Chopper's scary. O.O

Also, is there a particular reason to Usopp having a mustache? :P
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Postby taboo » Sun Dec 11, 2005 3:03 pm

Also, is there a particular reason to Usopp having a mustache?
Actually yes, but I'm not going to reveal all the inspiration I've had for this until it's finished. ^^
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Postby Myoti » Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:21 pm

Ah, I see.

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Postby Silvanis » Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:41 pm

HILARIOUS! *claps*
I'm in love with this song!!
Lion
Mysterious, that's what I call you.
I'm curious about you.
I'm scared and I'm not sure that you are safe.
But, something in your eyes says you are good.
This is not a dream that I'm living,
this is just a world of your own.
You took me from all that I knew,
showed me how it feels to hope.
With you with me, facing tomorrow together,
I could learn to fly.
It feels like I'm living in the lion's mouth,
but the lion is an angel.
Wise eyes, you see the core of me.
Your gentleness melts me.
Now I know that words cannot describe
the power that I feel when I'm with you.
This is not a dream that I'm living,
this is just a world of your own.
You took me from all that I knew,
showed me how it feels to hope.
With you with me, facing tomorrow together,
I could learn to fly.
It feels like I'm living in the lion's mouth,
but the lion is...
peace and power
love forever.
Who am I to stand before you?
I am speechless,
but in my weakness you are here and all is well.

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Postby uc pseudonym » Sun Dec 11, 2005 8:32 pm

Usopp reminds me of Mario.

That aside, I like what I see. Interesting execution, so far. I'd like to see more of an apparently intelligent Luffy.
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Postby taboo » Wed Dec 14, 2005 8:02 pm

Gah, I'm sorry but there won't be any new pages this week. Finals x__x
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Postby Myoti » Wed Dec 14, 2005 8:21 pm

Ah. Same here.... kinda. :p
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Postby Mave » Fri Dec 16, 2005 4:46 pm

I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!
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Postby Myoti » Sat Dec 17, 2005 9:18 am

I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!

You really should then. You may like it. ^_^
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Postby Jack Bond » Thu Feb 09, 2006 12:26 pm

Mave wrote:I don't follow One Piece at all so I wouldn't get the references. But still, the artwork is great and this looks interesting. XD Keep up the great work!


same here.
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Postby taboo » Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:04 pm

Woot, finally!

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Postby Myoti » Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:12 am

Yay, Taboo-sama! :D

"I do so like me spinach..." for some odd reason, I could so see Franky saying that.

And Zoro's flower disappeared! \o.o/
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Postby uc pseudonym » Tue Feb 21, 2006 6:46 pm

This is a welcome surprise. My apologies if you have already answered this, but how long of a comic do you have in mind?
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Postby taboo » Tue Feb 21, 2006 9:45 pm

I'm going for about 3 chapters worth. =/ I need to pick up the pace...
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Postby Tommy » Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:28 pm

Dang, only half of them show up. The rest is blocked.
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Postby taboo » Wed Feb 22, 2006 10:59 pm

:/ Darn, that stinks. Here's a .zip file of all the pages thus far for you: http://h1.ripway.com/ragweed/op1ece.zip
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Postby Tommy » Thu Feb 23, 2006 8:57 am

Soooooo.......out of character.

FUNNY!
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Postby Mave » Sun Feb 26, 2006 7:06 am

3 chapters hmmm? Good good...more to look forward too. XD
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Postby bigsleepj » Tue Apr 11, 2006 12:05 am

Just out of curiosity, is there going to be any updates? :grin: Just asking. :)
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Postby taboo » Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:29 pm

Yes, there will be soon! =D
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Postby bigsleepj » Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:17 pm

Ah good!! :grin:
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Postby soul alive » Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:36 pm

Very funny! I'm a little out of the loop only having seen three or four episodes of the show. Lovely artwork though.

Completely off topic:
It threw me for a loop seeing taboo's and bigsleepj's avatars one after the other. They are fairly similar, what with the toothy, large nosed, black hat with white band-ed, left facing characters and all. lol
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Postby Goofy-Luffy » Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:14 pm

"And I do so likes me spinach." :lol:
That's really funny!


COOL! COOL! COOL! :lol:

I like.
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Postby That Dude » Sun Oct 29, 2006 12:12 pm

I'm liking what I see so far.
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Postby Goofy-Luffy » Thu Nov 23, 2006 5:18 pm

Any more? ? ? ?
Please? ? ? ?
With sugar on top? ? ? ?
So when are you going to do more? :thumb:
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Postby taboo » Wed Nov 29, 2006 3:46 pm

:< I don't know, it's on temporary hiatus...
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