Kardia

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Postby meboeck » Thu May 18, 2006 3:16 pm

Wow, I really like page 12 too. Totally random! I'm really curious what's going to happen next.
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Postby Syreth » Sat Jun 10, 2006 9:11 pm

Ack, what a place for a lull in the updates, huh. Many apologies. Finals kept me pretty busy. Pages 13-14 are up for those who haven't checked in awhile. For those who've read 13, I changed the dialogue slightly for honesty's sake.

Instead of Luke saying, "He's right behind me!"
He says something like, "He could show up any minute!"

^^ Not such a big deal, really but it was bugging me in spite of that. Hopefully these pages give some clarity as to what's happenning.
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Postby Sakura15 » Sun Jun 11, 2006 5:25 am

ROFL!!! Luke better be careful, he's officially ticked that lady off :lol:
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Postby meboeck » Tue Jun 13, 2006 1:57 pm

I already told you this, but that last panel was hysterical! "Tanya's Superior Intellectual Process." :lol:
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Postby Syreth » Sun Jul 09, 2006 9:04 pm

Updated with page 15 of chapter 3. I'm so sorry things have been coming along so slowly, but I've been occupied with other things. It should pick up soon, though, as I'm investing in a tablet! :grin: Working all the time pays off quite literally. ^^
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Postby Syreth » Thu Aug 17, 2006 3:37 pm

Okay, apologies for the slow going. No more excuses, I just gotta do it! I posted page 16, thus concluding chapter 3 along with some commentary.
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Postby soul alive » Thu Aug 17, 2006 5:08 pm

Good to see another update. Don't worry about slow going; many of us are just as busy, and completely feel your pain.

Looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here, 'specially since you left us with a bit of a cliffhanger.
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Postby Syreth » Wed Oct 18, 2006 12:02 am

Well, I finally did an update of sorts. I've started on revamping Kardia -- something that I've been wanting to do for a long time, especially since the old chapter 1 doesn't have screen tones. Hopefully there will be more of the improved chapter 1 coming in the near future. I also want to keep the story going, so that there's something new to see. Hope you enjoy. ^^
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Postby Mave » Wed Oct 18, 2006 12:32 am

You go, Sy! *runs off to harass him about this revamp*
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Postby uc pseudonym » Wed Oct 18, 2006 5:23 pm

I think it looks a lot nicer. Not being as art oriented, I enjoyed the improved paneling and general progression more. It will be interesting to see how you balance new updates, revamped pages, and anything else you may be working on.
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Postby Syreth » Sat Dec 23, 2006 12:36 pm

Heh, thanks guys! It will be... interesting to see how I balance everything. I just hope I'm not biting off more than I can chew.

With that, 2 more pages of chapter one are up. Next update should be continuing the story from chapter 4.
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