The Box

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The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Fri Feb 05, 2016 11:26 am

Here story I m thinking of it please no copying since this my own original work thanks, plus you must ONLY chose the options given to you!!!

As I awoke, I find myself in in small dark room, In the middle of the room is a light bulb flicking on and off attached a string above, below light is crate of some kind made out wood, with no handle, no top nothing suggest you could open it, above and around me is cave made of stone with no way out.
Many questions went through my head and I have no idea on how got here or why I m here. Then as I start to stand, my body is
ache with pain like I had been fighting something.
As I looked around barely seeing anything and having feel my way around, I noticed that cave walls were moist with water. I felt all round the cave for another way out but there seemed to be no way out. So I stood there wondering what to do?
It seemed as if I had been thrown into some type of prison then I looked back at the crate and something about the crate drew to it, I can't explain what it was but I walked to the crate where the flickering light was to see why I it drawing me to it.
What should I do?

A.Open The Crate

B.Find another way out
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Re: The Box

Postby IPv4 » Fri Feb 05, 2016 11:34 am

open the crate.
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Re: The Box

Postby Rusty Claymore » Fri Feb 05, 2016 5:39 pm

C. ascertain with certainty whether the cat in the crate is dead or not dead before opening the crate.
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Re: The Box

Postby Banana Lobster » Fri Feb 05, 2016 6:14 pm

Follow the cord from the lightbulb: if you can't follow it out, carefully pull the crate apart. You'll have firewood/weapons if you do it right.
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Fri Feb 26, 2016 12:06 pm

As I approached the crate, I started to see small little round pebbles on the right side of the crate. Then something pulled me down to ground, and I sat paralyzed not knowing what to do.
My arms seemed to be free to move around but I was stuck sitting there, so I tried my best to grab the small pebble bending my back while staying paralyzed in a sitting position, reaching as far I could, I grabbed a handful pebbles and went back to my sitting position.
Not knowing what to do with the pebbles, I started throwing them toward crate and they made small hoes in the crate, but was the crate that fragile that it be broken so easily? I thought. It strange this is so simple yet it makes no sense I thought.
As ran out pebbles to throw at the crate I noticed something inside the crate, but could not see what it was, then as if the paralyzed spell wore off, I able to move again and was wondering why I was paralyzed in the first place.
Oh well let's see what's in this crate so I took more pebbles and busted the crate with the pebbles and inside the crate is a lever made dark wood that was lifted down and so I lifted back up and the top came off and inside the crate is blue book.

a.Open the blue book
b. Stay in the Cave
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Re: The Box

Postby IPv4 » Fri Feb 26, 2016 12:35 pm

burn the blue book
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Tue Apr 05, 2016 3:59 pm

As I stare at the blue book wondering what is and why something so simple could be in this crate, I begin to open the blue blue book and at first I was reading words then as I read the book more a sort of portal opened up before me and the world around me faded yet I was still reading in the cave, and it visualized into lush green grass, green hills in the back side, a warm air breeze, and I seemed to be sitting under is a big oak tree.
As I stood there looking as far as I could see I noticed everything had depth so different than reality itself. No words could explain it or even describe it and that the simple version of it.
As I looked around some more, I notice a person dressed in all white walking around this place.


So what should I do?
a.Talk to the person
b.Or keep exploring
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Fri Jun 17, 2016 12:28 pm

As I approach this person, I notice he is wearing a white robe, with lush blond hair, his face very narrow with a long nose, a smile like no other with l thick sandals as shoes. As I approach the man I asked: "Who are you?"
The man replied, "Ah, I see you have come, my name goes by different names but you can call me friend?"
As I stood there stunned by the man's words, I asked: "Where am I, is this real?"
The friend then answered "It not a matter of what something is or isn't. It's the matter of what you believe. This world could be real or could be fake at the same time."
As we walk along we come across a forest with lush green trees on either side then a dirt leading into blackness.
The friend then asked, "Will you take the path?"
a.Take the Path
b.contunine talking with the friend.
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Re: The Box

Postby TheChocolateGamer » Fri Jun 17, 2016 12:38 pm

b.continue talking with the friend
Galatians 3:13 NIV: Christ redeemed us from the curse of the law by becoming a curse for us, for it is written: “Cursed is everyone who is hung on a pole.”

Luke 6:31 NIV (The Golden Rule): Do to others as you would have them do to you.

“Too much of anything is dangerous, unless it's God's Love.”
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Mon Jun 20, 2016 11:58 am

I then answered, "I will stay with you since that path looks creepy."
Friend smiled then said, "If you had taken the path something great would have happened, but you have chosen a different path something different will happen."
I stared confused ready to ask another question when my mind raced back to the cave I was in.
Apparently I had been walking along reading the book but did not realize it because the other world seemed so real, when a sudden jolt lifted me high above the ground like one of those traps when you walk in the circle then the circle tightens up and lifts you high above. Apparently I was being held up by a tiny string with no way down, trying to hold onto the book but eventually, the book dropped and turned into ashes as it hit the ground.
So was this something new or something different, had this always been here or not, it seems like when I read the book first I did not notice anything now, around me are small traps,
many traps to be exact, they look like mouse traps with a bait of cheese in each one and if you put your foot on the metal bar chomp goes your foot. Just thinking of that me cringe but how am I suppose to get down now?
On the ground laid these mouse traps everywhere but below I could see a small dirt trail that went between them. So if I could find some other resourse I might be able to get down from here. I looked around in the cave and saw the same flicking light expect it was not ficking or even swinging, it lit part of the cave where the cave was unfourntly I could not see myself and what damage those mouse traps did to me. So with the resourse around me what shall I do?
a.Swing to get the lightblub to cut myself down.
b.hang there to till I get exaused.
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Re: The Box

Postby TheChocolateGamer » Mon Jun 20, 2016 1:04 pm

a. swing to the lightblub to cut myself down
Galatians 3:13 NIV: Christ redeemed us from the curse of the law by becoming a curse for us, for it is written: “Cursed is everyone who is hung on a pole.”

Luke 6:31 NIV (The Golden Rule): Do to others as you would have them do to you.

“Too much of anything is dangerous, unless it's God's Love.”
― Reign

You seem happy from the bottom of your heart. That also makes me me just as happy.
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Tue Jul 05, 2016 12:25 pm

As hang there upside down, I start thinking of another way to get down. So as test experiment to test my idea I moved left and the string followed as I moved left and when I moved right I moved right. Right now I can swing myself to the the light bulb and hopefully the heat will bring the string which surprisingly holds me up.
So I swing right towards the light bulb trying to see if the heat will melt the string that hold me up. First time not close enough, second time a little more, third time I got up the point I need lifted my back and tried to move the string closer then the heat from the light bulb sent fire to the string and I fell to the ground.
Now on the ground I fully expected to those mouse traps to hurt me but they did not, as got up I saw all the mouse traps I thought I saw were clear like an illusion of some kind.
AS strange as that might sound.
So I begin to look around again and saw another book but expect this book was green instead of blue. Now what should I do?
1.Open the green book
2.Stay in the Cave
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Re: The Box

Postby TheChocolateGamer » Fri Jul 08, 2016 12:32 pm

1.Open the green book
Galatians 3:13 NIV: Christ redeemed us from the curse of the law by becoming a curse for us, for it is written: “Cursed is everyone who is hung on a pole.”

Luke 6:31 NIV (The Golden Rule): Do to others as you would have them do to you.

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Re: The Box

Postby IPv4 » Fri Aug 19, 2016 1:22 pm

OPEN THE GREEN BOOK AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Mon Aug 29, 2016 12:38 pm

As I approached the green book I noticed a swarm of bats came out from the cave screeching what looked like an extra tunnel going out of the cave. The more I thought of the books, I wondered why these books were here and who put them here?
I began to open the green book and started reading but unlike last time I began to be swarm into total darkness. A darkness so thick you could not see your hand in front of your face. There is no light either and all I hear are people in agony and crying out though I could not see anything the pain would pierce you for these people must have become of victims of someone.
Then an evil voice said my name and I shrieked, it sounded so evil, with a screech and scratching on the chalkboard voice said "Your new home."
I wanted to wake up from this nightmare so I started running not knowing where I was going in this total darkness when suddenly a flash of light stood in the distance in front of me, so I started running towards it when I looked back I saw these black arms coming out of the darkness trying to catch me and I barely made it into the light and its shaped like a cylinder which blocked the black arms and then the black arms fell to the ground and were sucked back into darkness.

On the ground in the light read a note:
a.Back to the Cave
b.head up
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeldafan2 » Mon Sep 12, 2016 6:21 am

B. head up
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Re: The Box

Postby Zeke365 » Mon Sep 26, 2016 10:30 am

I looked down at the letter and pressed it like button head, then all the floor starting rising. It did not rise fast or slow just a medium past, all I need is some elevator music.
Just then I heard a chorus of song I never heard before, it as if I imaged it and it came true. Strange does that mean everything is built on my imagination or is something more happening here or can just think of something and it come true?
The floor rose up back to the Cave I was in though I had expected it to take it to friend but that did not seem to be the case.
So this cave is important somehow, but why would I feel pain despite of everything. Nothing seemed to add up. As I looked around the cave some more, it seemed brighter not sure how but everything seemed bit brighter.
I walked around the cave some more and went back where that bats came from and noticed that same dark tunnel but something is very eerie about that tunnel something like the smell of death.
I quickly turned away and moved around to see if anything else was amiss but nothing was.
It strange how one book lead me to beautiful garden but the other lead me to dark dungeon. Who would have left these books and what is this place?
the more I pondered the more I had questions on how I got here and why I'm here and what my role here?
then next to the box I saw another letter and next to it is gold book, no title just gold book so I looked at the letter and it said


1.Open the Gold book?
2.Figure out the answers on your own?
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