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Listen

Postby Wolfsong » Mon Jul 13, 2015 5:29 pm

A pain I can't express
The tension straining before me
My heart is beating and reason is crying
I wish I could close my ears
I wish I could close my heart

Its hard to hear from another's lips
Truth that will be denied
Listen as hurtful words are delivered
Listen because I can't turn away

Listen, can't you hear them?
Quiet tears falling behind you
Silence fills the space between
But can't you hear it?

Hear the screaming in the silence
I....have nothing to say.
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Re: Listen

Postby TheAlbinoMoose » Wed Jul 22, 2015 12:33 pm

Very nice... I'm getting the feels. There needs to be a Like button. Also, the art/writing boards don't get the attention they deserve, and seem to be overlooked. And that's a shame, cause there are some nice things (like dis) here!
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Re: Listen

Postby Wolfsong » Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:26 pm

TheAlbinoMoose wrote:Very nice... I'm getting the feels. There needs to be a Like button. Also, the art/writing boards don't get the attention they deserve, and seem to be overlooked. And that's a shame, cause there are some nice things (like dis) here!

Thanks AM. And yeah, I agree. A Like button would be nice.
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Re: Listen

Postby Banana Lobster » Wed Jul 22, 2015 5:44 pm

Very nice, I'm not any good at writing poems. I understand what the intent behind the writing is (usually at least), but trying to get my thoughts out in a structured form like that is hard for me. Well done Wolf. :thumb:
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