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Voltage's Thread fer stories!

Postby Voltage » Wed Dec 07, 2011 7:18 am

Heyyo, I'm kinda new, but I just figured it this was the place where I could put my writing out there, I would do it here!

I'll update lots! :P

(Sorry if it bothers you, but I have a problem with capitalizing things when need be... and when need NOT be...)
Call me Russia, da?

MLIAWESOME.
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Postby seaglass27 » Fri Dec 09, 2011 5:56 am

Can't wait to read your stuff!
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Postby Voltage » Mon Dec 12, 2011 11:34 am

First Poem;

Pressure to be perfect, the need to be cool
Zombie walks, almost sleeping between home and school

Makeup & perfume, bracelets and rings
your whole week ruined by one little thing

Worried about grades going nowhere but down
Way to worried about when college will come 'round

Boys that we like who never look our way
Best friends & iPods get us through the day

Drama, backstabbing, rumors and lies
Moments when you fall apart and just want to cry

Feeling bad about ourselves with no reason said
Walking around your feet feeling like lead


Those desperate days when nothing goes right
Feeling alone on sleepless nights


Finding our way through this mixed up world,

welcome to the life
of a teenage girl
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Postby sarahjoy78 » Wed Dec 14, 2011 3:39 am

WOW! That is SO true!!!! That was amazing! Great Job! :D
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Postby seaglass27 » Tue Dec 20, 2011 2:14 pm

That poem describes high school well.
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Postby AdriTan » Wed Jan 11, 2012 10:33 pm

I agree that this pretty much describes high school! i don't Mind IF your caPitalIZation is WacKY as long as you don't mind my spelingg
Love Momma Flower @}~~,~
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