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For Those Who Live Off of Memories - a message to help move on

Postby Fsiphskilm » Fri Nov 07, 2003 1:58 pm

Poem By Volt,
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I'm leaving CAA perminantly. i've wanted to do this for a long time but I've never gathered the courage to let go.
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:35 pm

It may need editing, but I think your thoughts came through nonetheless. :) I like it. SouthernSun, a.k.a. Volt, I really like it. You remind me of Paul, so full of heart and some times stumbling along the way, but always so sold on the Lord and knowing where you came from. :thumb: Write some more. Do you keep a journal?

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Fsiphskilm » Sat Nov 08, 2003 10:16 am

no i don't
I'm leaving CAA perminantly. i've wanted to do this for a long time but I've never gathered the courage to let go.
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