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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Wed May 11, 2011 9:55 am

I do a lot of song writing and I've filmed some of my songs with my Flip and put them on YouTube.
I'm looking for some feedback so if you could take the time and check them out and tell me what you think that would be greatly appreciated! =]

I wrote these two songs a while ago and just recently "fixed them up" and filmed them.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vYwvMF8BfMI

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVpZYMQzmX8


This one I wrote recently and played at a talent show at my church.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=280Jo_xTVfI


THANKS! I'll be recorded new ones soon.
I've never had voice lessons so that's why my voice sounds unstable and it tends to be a little off key at some points. Does anyone have any tips for my voice? I'd appreciate that too.

Thanks! ^_^
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Postby MrKrillz0r » Fri May 13, 2011 6:27 am

Awesome music. :D
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Mon May 16, 2011 8:07 am

Thank you!
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Postby Syreth » Mon May 16, 2011 9:06 am

You should get these produced. Great work on these.
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Tue May 17, 2011 11:14 am

Thank you Syreth. I want to get my songs recorded..I'm just not sure exactly how to go about doing that.

Here's a new song I wrote yesterday.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ASTtm3TmYCo
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Postby Sapphire225 » Tue May 17, 2011 1:22 pm

These are pretty good. I agree with Syreth, you should look into getting them produced.
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Postby Kingdom » Wed May 18, 2011 4:37 am

The songs are awesome, really into the latest one you did too, really like it.
Only if we could figure out a way to record it with better quality.
hmmm
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Wed May 18, 2011 6:31 am

I made a "music page" for Facebook today to try and get my music out there more so... if you want to support my creations please "like" this page and share it with friends!
http://www.facebook.com/pages/BethMaries-Music/184131231635850

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Postby Syreth » Wed May 18, 2011 8:45 am

lilmonsterteeth (post: 1479524) wrote:Thank you Syreth. I want to get my songs recorded..I'm just not sure exactly how to go about doing that.

If I knew you, I would offer to record your songs. In lieu of that, I'd suggest meeting and hanging out with musicians until you find one who has a home studio or something. It really wouldn't be too hard to lay down a vocal and piano track so you could at least have a demo to show people. Don't be afraid to be picky and find one with some considerable talent with studio recording - you have the makings of a great product. :]
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Thu May 19, 2011 8:21 am

Syreth (post: 1479795) wrote:If I knew you, I would offer to record your songs. In lieu of that, I'd suggest meeting and hanging out with musicians until you find one who has a home studio or something. It really wouldn't be too hard to lay down a vocal and piano track so you could at least have a demo to show people. Don't be afraid to be picky and find one with some considerable talent with studio recording - you have the makings of a great product. :]


thanks for the advice! i really appreciate it! =]
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Postby Kingdom » Thu May 19, 2011 8:25 am

Hey monster how many "likes" did you get so far?
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Thu May 19, 2011 8:52 am

Kingdom (post: 1479993) wrote:Hey monster how many "likes" did you get so far?


Fifteen.
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Postby MrKrillz0r » Thu May 19, 2011 3:10 pm

lilmonsterteeth (post: 1479997) wrote:Fifteen.


I'm the third of these special 15.. Thats just how awesome I am.
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Thu May 19, 2011 4:12 pm

MrKrillz0r (post: 1480053) wrote:I'm the third of these special 15.. Thats just how awesome I am.


Yes, you liked my page before some of my closest friends!!! THANKS! =]]]]
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Postby Kingdom » Fri May 20, 2011 4:41 am

Love your tarantula song, i'm still singing it today!
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Fri May 20, 2011 7:02 am

Kingdom (post: 1480140) wrote:Love your tarantula song, i'm still singing it today!


haha thanks!
for those who don't know.. I wrote a silly song yesterday about a spider. =P

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_t6o50Rh9g
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Postby Kingdom » Fri May 20, 2011 7:08 am

LOL Me and Krillz are talking about Mr. Tarantula in chat at the moment. LOL
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Postby MrKrillz0r » Fri May 20, 2011 7:20 am

Kingdom (post: 1480148) wrote:LOL Me and Krillz are talking about Mr. Tarantula in chat at the moment. LOL


True. :D
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Fri May 20, 2011 10:57 am

oh! Well, I hope you were saying nice things about Mr. Tarantula. =P
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Postby lilmonsterteeth » Tue Jun 14, 2011 5:11 am

Here's a new song I wrote recently.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rhPmId056ys
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Postby Kingdom » Tue Jun 14, 2011 6:36 am

Love this song, sounds great!!!
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