8-23-04 Edit: The main thread that I would like to have be the only one people look at and post on is "Critique Colorc's art here! Woot! Come see"
This is where I'm gunna post all my art form now on.
Here's a link to that thread: http://www.christiananime.com/showt...46&page=1&pp=10
Orignal:
hello,
Here's some of my art. please tell me what ya'll think of it.
I am also looking for someone to take these sketches and create an outline of them on their computer. I don't have photoshop of any cool programs like that so I can't make out lines of my sketches. If you decided to take on this task please PM me so I know that someone is working on it. If you decide to accept this challenge, please ignore any tones or hatching that I put in on the orig. sketch on the pants, clothes, hair, ect. Just keep outlines and clothing folds and stuff like that. The most important pic. I need done is the on of the girl with the swirl around her. If nothing else, it would be cool if you could do that.
Also feedback would be welcome if someone wanted to comment on my art. I'm looking for constructive criticism so don't be worried about hurting my feelings.
thanks,
olorc
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Oh, yea, I have much better quality pics on my computer. If you're interested in outlining my stuff and helping me out, PM me and I will e-mail you these better quality pics.
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Mave, after the outlines are done I was going to try to have an unofficial coloring contest and eventually try to make either some cool bookmarks, or wallpapers, or t-shirts. Not to sell, just to have and for free.
Also this will have been the first time any of my art has gone past the sketch phase and I would like to see what it is like past that point.
Also this will have been the first time any of my art has gone past the sketch phase and I would like to see what it is like past that point.
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kirastill wrote:very cool. just wondering though, in the last picture, what's blowing the air?
That was supposed to be a dragon. But I have never really studied or practiced drawing dragons so I started to look like a deer with big wiskers.
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anyvone else vith a kohmment? *said in a heavy german accent*
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how old r u and how long have u been drawing? if u want i can give u some tips and stuff but i want to know some background b4 i do so.
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ok 
"The only consolation I find in your immediate presence is your ultimate absence."
"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today."
Lord I give you my heart
I give you my soul
I live for you alone
Every breathe that I take
Every moment I'm awake
Lord have your way in me..
"Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today."
Lord I give you my heart
I give you my soul
I live for you alone
Every breathe that I take
Every moment I'm awake
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Those are some really good scketches olorc.
I'de really like to see how they come out after the're outlined.
I'de really like to see how they come out after the're outlined.
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Thanks for the thoughts Anime King, Mave has one of them done, it looks really good actually.
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Cool stuff!
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I have a Deviant Art! http://keiko-mukisune.deviantart.com/
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Stephanuz wrote:hey... good pic.
How did you learn to draw Anime (website or somethin)?
Because I can sortta draw but I need Imporvement.
Yea, umm, sorta a site by july dillion (search for it on google if you really want to find it I forget the exact URL) and just people watching to get anatomy and also some drawing books like how to draw manga vol.1 and also just watching anime to pick up the style. Sorry I know that doesn't really help. Is there a specific area that you would like me to expound upon?
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*Rubs eyes*
Oui, I juts figured out you have like, three separate albums floating around and i got kinda lost very quick. Would you mind sticking to just one album, at least for a little while. Makes tracking and critiquing art so much easier insead of trying to simultaneously have three seperate threads running while looking back and forth and figuring which thread should have which response to what art piece.
I don't wanna sound winny, and I don't mean to point the finger, I just find it very.....time and space consuming.
Anyways, I'll try to included a response to another art pick in another album, as well as comment on some art here as well. You asked me how to go about adding weight to the cloak on one of your other particular pieces. Mainly, just study how cloth folds and floats in real life, and you'll see that cloth will actually take form when it is being filled with air. It's quite an interesting thing, probably one of the few examples of seeing air take a visibly sold form via the parameters of the cloth. You might consider having the cloak blow a tad in the wind, while giving it contour folds and stress creases, things to give the cloth some character. Thats roughly what I mean.
As for the art here, personally, I like your other graphic style better. It's more raw and original, I think if you were to develop it more, it could turn into something very wild.
Anyways, i hope I didn't sound too cranky, it's about 2 in the morning for me roughly. If I said anything too rude I apologize.....
God Bless,
Archan
Oui, I juts figured out you have like, three separate albums floating around and i got kinda lost very quick. Would you mind sticking to just one album, at least for a little while. Makes tracking and critiquing art so much easier insead of trying to simultaneously have three seperate threads running while looking back and forth and figuring which thread should have which response to what art piece.
I don't wanna sound winny, and I don't mean to point the finger, I just find it very.....time and space consuming.
Anyways, I'll try to included a response to another art pick in another album, as well as comment on some art here as well. You asked me how to go about adding weight to the cloak on one of your other particular pieces. Mainly, just study how cloth folds and floats in real life, and you'll see that cloth will actually take form when it is being filled with air. It's quite an interesting thing, probably one of the few examples of seeing air take a visibly sold form via the parameters of the cloth. You might consider having the cloak blow a tad in the wind, while giving it contour folds and stress creases, things to give the cloth some character. Thats roughly what I mean.
As for the art here, personally, I like your other graphic style better. It's more raw and original, I think if you were to develop it more, it could turn into something very wild.
Anyways, i hope I didn't sound too cranky, it's about 2 in the morning for me roughly. If I said anything too rude I apologize.....
God Bless,
Archan
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Archan wrote:*Rubs eyes*
Oui, I juts figured out you have like, three separate albums floating around and i got kinda lost very quick. Would you mind sticking to just one album, at least for a little while. Makes tracking and critiquing art so much easier insead of trying to simultaneously have three seperate threads running while looking back and forth and figuring which thread should have which response to what art piece.
Yea, umm, you basically summed up my lack of organization
when it comes to posting my art on the web. The main thread that I would like to have be the only one people look at and post on is "Critique Colorc's art here! Woot! Come see"
I'm gunna post the pics from this thread there too along with the other three that you were commenting on from my other thread.
Here's a link to that thread: http://www.christiananime.com/showthread.php?t=11146&page=1&pp=10
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