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Postby Falcon » Thu May 12, 2005 10:12 pm

a new anime i drew very new at this.
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Postby Liger'smane » Fri May 13, 2005 8:31 am

Nice start. You might want to make the face a little less angular and a little thinner. But really, quite a nice start.
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Postby Falcon » Sat May 14, 2005 1:37 am

Liger'smane wrote:Nice start. You might want to make the face a little less angular and a little thinner. But really, quite a nice start.


Thank you for your comments. I will try what you have suggested.

Here is the very first anime I ever drew and the very first computer painted drawing I did.

My avatar is the first vector drawing I have done.
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Postby Hephzibah » Sat May 14, 2005 1:57 am

Ok, firstly the clothes look great (well... certainly ALOT better than mine ;) )
However, the waist is a bit too skinny, and the feet need to be bigger. Also, try making the shoulders a bit more narrow. The neck seems to be lob-sided, so just correct that... and... yeah! I think that's it. Btw, I absolutely adore the belt :grin:
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Postby Falcon » Tue May 24, 2005 4:22 am

This is one I drew and inked today. I have drawen two others today but I need to go to bed so they wil come soon.
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