Jam: Elric/Chibi collab

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Jam: Elric/Chibi collab

Postby chibi_chan » Wed Apr 13, 2005 5:08 pm

Sence the gallery ain't workin' I have to post this here. Heres a pic that Elric drew and with his permission he let me color it. Jam ain't my favorite character from Guilty Gear so I don't have to many pics of her, only one and I saved it because Bridget was in it. >.> I'm gonna post my art here till the gallery woks. Comments and constructive critiscm are welcome. =3

p.s. I tried to make it look transparent so thats why the backround overlaps.
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happy go luck monkey!
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akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita

hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi

nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo

maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo

yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Wed Apr 13, 2005 5:58 pm

:wow!: Wow, I mean... :wow!: wow! This was one of my favorite drawings Elric did, and you're idea of coloring it was brilliant. :thumb:

This coloring job must have taken a long time to do. I mean, it really does give it a transparent look. At the bottom of her shirt, the pink section looks see-through.

Another great collaboration by you and your brother, Chibs. :jump: :rock: And I'm not just saying that because you're both my kids. XDDD;;;

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Postby Ashley » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:39 pm

Whoa ho....that's awesome Chibis/Elric. You both deserve a ton of praise. Impressed as always. I love her expression, the clothes...and Chibi you even added that white highlight on her lip (that most people don't). The only thing I can even think to fix would be the white "nike" like symbol/highlight on her sleeve--I think you might want to double check that because unless the fabric is shiny, the highlight should extend almost to the edge of the material on the side with the light. Did that make sense? If not I can sketch it and show you.

Otherwise, congratulatons on another fantastic piece.

BTW the gallery should be working now...if it isn't go PM Oldphil or leave him a thread in the comment box.
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Postby chibi_chan » Wed Apr 13, 2005 9:56 pm

Thankies =3

I tried editing it out of the pictur so here's the revised version.

p.s. Editing isn't my strong point so it's a bit crappy XD;;

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happy go luck monkey!
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akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita

hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi

nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo

maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo

yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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Postby Debitt » Wed Apr 13, 2005 10:11 pm

=O Wow wow wow! O_O The shading....ish so good. T_T; Jam isn't exactly my favorite character either (her voice is SO annoying), but I love this. Like I said, you two should consider doing a sibling collaboration manga or something. x3 I'd buy it!
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Postby Aka-chan » Thu Apr 14, 2005 12:20 am

Wooooo!! This looks awesome! You guys keep bringing your art to whole new levels and surprising me every time. Beautiful work! The transparency is a neat effect. ^__^
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Postby Ashley » Thu Apr 14, 2005 12:26 am

Ah yes, the highlight looks much better now. Nice improvement!
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Postby Mangafanatic » Thu Apr 14, 2005 5:53 am

AHHH!! That's INCREDIBLE! I absolutely love it! Great job guys! *Save-y save-y save-y*

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Postby Yumie » Thu Apr 14, 2005 6:05 am

Man, another fantastic job that makes me realize my own complete lack of talent. I envy you, ha ha. Good job!
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Postby soul alive » Thu Apr 14, 2005 9:37 am

wooo. very nice job. i really like the transparency of it. nice job both of you. :thumb:
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Postby Danyasaur » Thu Apr 14, 2005 9:46 am

*gawks* whoa, that uber rocks! XD *^5s* great job ya'll!
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Postby chibi_chan » Thu Apr 14, 2005 7:23 pm

Thankies =3
happy go luck monkey!
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akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita

hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi

nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo

maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo

yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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Postby Esoteric » Fri Apr 15, 2005 8:41 am

Wow, awesome work. I very much like the use of the 'circular blue seal' to create the diamond patterns on her sleeves. I think the only thing I would change is how the blue seal colors her face and arm skin blue. If you were to erase the blue in thos areas, it would really pop her face out. But wonderful shading!
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Postby Angelchick » Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:47 pm

very nice. it looks really great.
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Postby chibi_chan » Mon Apr 25, 2005 12:14 am

Thank you =3

Wow, awesome work. I very much like the use of the 'circular blue seal' to create the diamond patterns on her sleeves. I think the only thing I would change is how the blue seal colors her face and arm skin blue. If you were to erase the blue in thos areas, it would really pop her face out. But wonderful shading!

I thought about your advice and thought of something that might work. but know I don't think I can do it, so i'll just keep this in mind. Thank you though for your help^^ *bows*
happy go luck monkey!
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akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita

hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi

nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo

maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo

yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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Postby Mr. SmartyPants » Mon Apr 25, 2005 4:36 am

her smile and face is really nice
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Postby Mave » Wed Apr 27, 2005 10:07 pm

I never really got the chance to comment on this. It's LOVELY! XD

Constructive criticism: I just find the blue background thingy a little awkward since it overlaps over the image subject. Did you guys intend that...or did you actually want it be 'behind' the girl?
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Postby That Dude » Mon May 09, 2005 10:44 am

Very nice stuff! Nice coloring job. You and your bro got a lot of talent.
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Postby chibi_chan » Wed May 11, 2005 10:47 am

thanks =3

Constructive criticism: I just find the blue background thingy a little awkward since it overlaps over the image subject. Did you guys intend that...or did you actually want it be 'behind' the girl?

It was meant to overlap so I guess, yeah^^;
happy go luck monkey!
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akai tsuki wo nagameteta kara nakitai hodo boku no fuan wa
itsumo kioku no katasumi ni kasabuta mitai ni nokoru yo
itai kurai kirei datta kedo hikari no naka no boku no kage wo
ano takai kanransha de dareka ga waratta ki ga shita

hitsuji no kigurumi wo kita mama yaseta otoko no ko ga odokete
haku iki wo shiroku sasete inoru youni te wo awaseta
ano ko to sora no aida ni wa toumei na nanika ga aru kara
kitto negai wa todokanai sukoshi samuku naru yuuenchi

nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridashita yo

maboroshi no BERU ga nari keshiki ga kasumi daseba
nanimokamo uso ni naru daremo inaku naru

boku no naka no boku wo itsuka katai GARASU bin ni tsumete
hi no ataru niwa no kadan ni koneko to issho ni umeyou
mizutamari ni utsuru kao wa tsumetai ame de gushagusha ni
chigireteitta ato ni tada no iro ni kawaridasu yo

yasashiku gin'iro no ame ga machi no subete ni furisosogu
michi no haji de sagashiteita boku wo yatto mitsuketa
isu no ue ni hana no ue ni ashi ga nai roba no senaka ni
komakai ame ga furisosogu boku no ue ni mo _____.
song: Hontou no Uso by PLastic Tree lyrics:anime lyrics
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