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Postby VELyuki_26 » Thu Sep 09, 2004 10:58 pm

I am stepping out here so bear with me. This is my first piece of this type here, but for some reason I wanted to post it. Many people think that all art has to be neat to be beautiful, but I believe that some art is not meant to be neat. I scribbled this in paint. I don't know why I'm posting this, but I hope it encourages someone. God Bless.
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Fri Sep 10, 2004 11:38 am

Wow, that is fantastic! I don't believe you have to stay in the lines to be an artist; in fact, an artist should know when to step out of the lines.

Also, I think this has a definite symmetry to it, even in it's static.

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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Postby Ssjjvash » Fri Sep 10, 2004 11:55 am

Cool, that's a great looking picture! Good job!
If you can force your heart and nerve and sinew
To serve your turn long after they are gone
And so hold on when there is nothing left in you
Except the Will which says to them: 'Hold on!' ...you'll be a Man, my son!

Rudyard Kipling


Satan, bite the dust!Image

"You are not who your mistakes say you are; you are not the sum of your failures!"---Rev. Billy Miller

Proverbs 18:24
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Postby b0redx3 » Fri Sep 10, 2004 10:00 pm

it looks nice~! I love the effect- a movement in the picture by the lines.
The only thing i will say to this is the outline of the profile face. I think you should use the background scribble-ness to create the "line" for the face and not drawn on.
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Postby emoanimechild » Fri Sep 10, 2004 10:10 pm

:wow!: thats awesome I agree with true_noir_chloe on this one besides I also like to think of art has a way of portraying feelings... and feelings aren't always neat :lol: Anyway I hope you post more up I know I enjoy it!
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Postby Retten » Fri Sep 10, 2004 10:16 pm

Art is just expresion who says it has to be neat lol Art is for everyone so make it how ever you like. Who knows maybe one day you will become famouse because of your unique style. Awsome job :thumb:
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Postby VELyuki_26 » Fri Sep 17, 2004 11:34 pm

Thank you all for the comments. I really do appreciate them. I would also agree with b0redx3 about the facial outline. Thanks for pointing that out. Again, I would hope that people are encouraged. God Bless.
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