February Entry: Lost keys

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February Entry: Lost keys

Postby Souba » Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:02 pm

[color="RoyalBlue"]Hi all,
This is my little entry. ;) I had a lot of fun creating this story, the theme just inspired me. :)

Title: Lost Keys
Length: 3 pages
Idea for March: Light

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Postby Esoteric » Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:17 pm

Very cool, Souba! You've got some classy panel compositions there, and the screen tones are well chosen. I'm always impressed when someone can tell a story in just three pages. Nice entry!
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Postby Souba » Thu Feb 21, 2008 7:25 pm

Esoteric (post: 1201510) wrote:Very cool, Souba! You've got some classy panel compositions there, and the screen tones are well chosen. I'm always impressed when someone can tell a story in just three pages. Nice entry!


[color="RoyalBlue"]Thank you Esoteric! Like I said I really loved your story, it made me not want to post up mine. :eh: But since I put a lot of work into it this week I figured I was obligated too, lol :thumb:
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Postby minakichan » Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:08 pm

Your seqart skillz are lovely!!
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Postby the_wolfs_howl » Fri Feb 22, 2008 5:13 am

Very cool art; I liked the way you drew the panels and stuff (and no, I don't know what I'm talking about). It really felt like reading a few pages out of a manga volume. I just felt that it was the beginning of a greater story to be told! :)
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Postby RidleyofZebes » Fri Feb 22, 2008 9:07 pm

:D Awesome! You even made the speech bubbles kinda vertical so it looks like it was translated! Excellent! :thumb:
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Postby Souba » Sat Feb 23, 2008 5:54 pm

the_wolfs_howl (post: 1201618) wrote:It really felt like reading a few pages out of a manga volume.


[color="RoyalBlue"]You know that statement made me cry with joy. I've worked for years at my art so that I would be able to recreate authentic Japanese style mangas, and I finally feel like I'm getting there!
Thank you gain everyone that just made my week! :D
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Postby AsianBlossom » Tue Feb 26, 2008 5:52 pm

I agree with the looking-like-it-was-translated thing. This comic is awesome; did you draw that background street image on the first page? If so...oh my gosh. This is reeeeeeally good artwork.
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Postby Pyro_artist » Mon Jul 21, 2008 6:16 pm

Very nice! did you use computer or did you do that comic by hand?
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Postby Souba » Thu Sep 27, 2012 9:58 pm

@Pyro it was drawn and inked by hand then scanned into Photoshop with screentones etc added.
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